come back to these when you've completed a few more projects.you need typography and image both for these.what you have so far isn't working.some images are too expected and/or treated in obvious ways.and, the type needs to be stronger.would like to see you do a collage for this piece.your collages are strong.did you see the recent hamlet poster in the subway and around town?a revamp of the old public theatre, paula scher identity by paula scher.nice use of white space.caught my attention while hurrying through the subway.that's where your collage comes in--it's eye catching.and uses white space well.keep at it.g.
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come back to these when you've completed a few more projects.
you need typography and image both for these.
what you have so far isn't working.
some images are too expected and/or treated in obvious ways.
and, the type needs to be stronger.
would like to see you do a collage for this piece.
your collages are strong.
did you see the recent hamlet poster in the subway and around town?
a revamp of the old public theatre, paula scher identity by paula scher.
nice use of white space.
caught my attention while hurrying through the subway.
that's where your collage comes in--
it's eye catching.
and uses white space well.
keep at it.
g.
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